In critiquing the Hamlet kidnapping report, I felt that overall, it was written much better than past reports we had to read and critique. This report seemed to chronologically make sense; therefore, it was easier to follow than past reports we were assigned. There were far less grammatical errors and spelling errors. The officer refrained from using victim 1 or victim 2 but instead referred to the victims once as a number and then continued with the victims' actual names. The officer, from what I could see, did well in documenting the dates and times.